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အ၇ႈံးသမား….feeling

စစ္တလင္းမွာ
၇ဲ၇င့္သေလာက္
အခ်စ္တလင္းမွာ…….
ဒူးတုန္တဲ့လူေတြလည္းရွိတယ္……….။

စစ္ပြဲတစ္၇ာႏႊဲ
ငါႏုိင္ခဲ့ေသာ္လည္း……..
အခ်စ္ေ၇းတြင္
ငါ………………..
ရႈံးနိမ့္ခဲ့၇ပါျပီ….ခ်စ္သူ၇ယ္……..။

                                       cupid

In: ကဗ်ာ Posted By: Date: Aug 18, 2010
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Comment #1

poem ေလးကမဆိုးပါဘူး…
ေကာင္းတယ္လို႕လဲမဟုတ္ေသးဘူး…
နည္းနည္းေတာ့….ေၾကာင္တယ္…

commentinfo By: arkar at Aug 18, 2010
Comment #2

စကားလံုးေတြကျမင္ဘူးေနက်ေတြပဲ..ေကာ္ပီလိုျဖစ္ေနတယ္..

commentinfo By: myatsu at Aug 18, 2010
Comment #3

့ဟုတ္တယ္…..copy ၾကီးလားမသိဘူး….

author name ၾကီးကလဲ….cupid တဲ့….

း………..name ကိုchange သင့္တယ္….

cupid ကို….loser ဆိုျပီးေတာ့……………………………

commentinfo By: arkar at Aug 18, 2010
Comment #4

not bad my frd, keep it up 😀

commentinfo By: eingyin at Aug 19, 2010

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