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Changing to Hurts
Our period has posion now.
I know that you not need me.
Everything had what he done.
But…,
At this time,I can leave you.
If you remark that love is not important,
Understanding not necessary between each other.
Actually,
You can colour my ego.
Your action is so great,
but not enough reason.
I wish that you,by holding her hand,can free from my sacking of mind.
My patience show negative.
I don’t wanna cry for you.
I don’t wanna friendship with lose one’s heart .
I could live 18 years without meeting you.
I could laugh all of 18 years without including you in my earth.
I prepare my options again.
I try to built my hurts larger to larger.
I hope oneday with my differently ambition.
You must fail under my hating.
All of my love must change to hurt.
Coming soon,……you must sad for your doings in past.
Comment #2
You must fail under my hating.
All of my love must change to hurt.
Coming soon,….you must sad for your doings in past. I think these sentences are filled with hurt and sadness. If she hurts by you , will you happy? I think no. So if u really love her,let her free. That’s my advice , not an order. Nice poem coz good writing.
By: X - ray at Aug 17, 2011
Comment #3
u must win under any conditions coz of ur pure love.
all of ur love must change to love.
coming soon,,,,u must happy with ur love for your doings in present.
By: ei lay at Aug 20, 2011
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Comment #1
My patience show negative.
I don’t wanna cry for you.
I don’t wanna friendship with lose one’s heart .
I could live 18 years without meeting you.
I could laugh all of 18 years without including you in my earth.
I prepare my options again.
I try to built my hurts larger to larger.
I hope oneday with my differently ambition.
You must fail under my hating.
All of my love must change to hurt.
Coming soon,……you must sad for your doings in past.
it’s..xo great