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I let her come in

Thats all my faults….cause i let her come in,
She took all from me…but give nothing,
I so weak when i with her…,
Her lips like a sword,
Slowly cut me and watch till i die,
Her words as a command….
Has no force to against and done whatever she said,
Her breath like a poison arrow….hit directly to my heart,
Slowly freezing and stop beating,
Finally,She crush me into one pieces but thats all my faults,
Cause I let her come in!

In: English Poem Posted By: Date: Jan 29, 2013
Comment #1

I wish I could.

commentinfo By: ei lay at Feb 2, 2013
Comment #2

Strong words with lots of love.
so much touching.

commentinfo By: ei lay at Feb 2, 2013

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