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ခြင္႔မသာ (DISABILITY)

DISABILITY

I fain would love
but that thou art
like orchids proud
earth-disdaining.

I fain would hope
but that thou art
like summit-snow
removed.

i fain would cry
but that thou like
the distant moon
with not hear.

ခြင္္႔မသာ

မႀကင္သာသည္ ၊ ခင္ပါလ်က္လည္း
ပင္ထက္လွ်ံ၀င္း ၊ ဇင္ေငြမင္းသို႔
ႀကဴသင္း ေ၀သီ ၿမင္႔ေသာေႀကာင္႔ ။

မတမ္းသာသည္ ၊ လြမ္းပါလ်က္လည္း
မိုးထက္ေရာင္္ဖံုး ၊ လ တနွုန္းသို႔
ခ်ိဳၿပံဳး ေ၀သီ ၿမင္႔ေသာေႀကာင္႔

မေခၚသာသည္ ၊ ေၿမာ္ပါလ်က္လည္း
ေတာင္ထက္ေငြေသြး ၊ ႏွင္းၿဖဴေဖြးသို႔
ႀကည္ေအး ေ၀သီ ၿမင္႔ေသာေႀကာင္႔။

In: ကဗ်ာ,မင္းသုဝဏ္ Posted By: Date: Dec 28, 2011
Comment #1

Thet Htar Nyein,
Nice one. Just a note to point out.

Please re-arrange your translated verses. The third verse should be the second and vice-versa to correspond to the verses of Min Thu Wun.
Kind regards,
Kant Kaw Mg

commentinfo By: kantkawmg at Dec 28, 2011

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